Onion Tears Poetry by Jake
Miss Lily’s Garden
No ghosts in the garden
Not one to be seen.
Just Miss Lily and
her floppy hat all
pretty and clean.
Lots of trees
with plums to
make some jam
to cheer Nam Huong up
as much as she can.
Flowers and ferns
all tangled up
Nam Huong is learning lessons
as she grows up.
May 14th, 2008 at 10:13 pm
A very nice piece of writing Jake. I’m sure you’ll remember Onion Tears for a long time.
Thanks for sharing such good work.
May 16th, 2008 at 1:54 am
This poem is really good! I love all the words you used. Very effective!
Keep up the good work!
May 19th, 2008 at 2:17 pm
Very good Jake!
Excellent word usage.
Its a nice poem.